Teacher Feedback On 1st Draft

The performance of the main artist is strong and there is a clear consideration for mise en scene in terms of costume and styling which is relevant to the genre and helps to convey the representation of teens going from being conformists (black and white 6th form uniform) to the more colorful/ casual clothing see during the rooftop scenes.) The main drawback of the video is that the overall concept is not clear. I would suggest you sit down and make a list of all the things/ social activities that your teenage audience would consume/ take part in and consider how you can include montage shots of these activities in your video. Remember your concept is about the freedom of youth culture. Consider this in terms of the overall mise en scene (costume ,props) camerawork, editing (including special effects/transitions). In order to pull this concept of you need to show how the video has been constructed in a way that breaks typical conventions. Watch some concept based dance videos for reference.